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Drawn in 2002. The sketch is called “Fatigued” which I drew from the Punjabi translated version of “Selected Stories Of Leo Tolstoy”. The story was “Akewe De Marre”. The book belonged to my father’s personal library in which he has many of the early Russian translated literature including Maxim Gorky, Hamzatov and Anton Chekhov.

Song is written by me or I wonder if its just a rendering. Work all day long in the farm and get soiled into soil and then lay flat on the grass under the partial shade of a tree. There will be sleep, restlessness and an eerie feeling surrounding you. That’s the destiny of my people here in Punjab, so called farmers. Its not us sitting on computers all day long who have got Earth more into relation but its them who have got more closer to the Earth. “Their body warms the Earth”

Dedicated to my father who has provided me with such sensibilities and with such books and such arts of the human kind.

AFTERTHOUGHT: My body warms the earth.
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ooooohhhh!!!
its nice and brown :D
:blush: sorry yeh i like it its really good

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"& now 2 open Thelma's present-the wonderful cap!""How'd u know that?""I did a little search in ur room the other day-Ah!The color I wanted!""That's not the 1 I got!""I no,I already exchanged it!wen the chicks see this hat,I'm gonna hav wall 2 wall hickey
thanku!! itz nize to have u first for the comment. u commented first on jlo and look what happened, the most faves. lets see what happens with this one.

im crossing my fingers (and legs). seems to me u r a lucky sign.

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ahahahah thats okay :hug:

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"& now 2 open Thelma's present-the wonderful cap!""How'd u know that?""I did a little search in ur room the other day-Ah!The color I wanted!""That's not the 1 I got!""I no,I already exchanged it!wen the chicks see this hat,I'm gonna hav wall 2 wall hickey
beautiful!
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i like the sketch-e-ness to it.

:+fav:

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:clap: i realy like it ist super sweeeeet!!!
i am :floating: and u are the air beneath my wings and thanks for the fave dear sparrow.

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In gone game. I like the flow there. High around green, two arms rest. Grass and rest don't rhyme, but the way they are placed in the poem make them fitting. An almost-rhyme, so to speak. I am fond of your sketch as well.

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i know about the rhyme patterns: ANAPESTIC, DACTYLIC, TROCHAIC, iambic, fouteeners, heroic, sestets, octaves, sonnet patterns, meter (dimeter, trimeter, hecta.., penta.. and so on) and stuff. i know about the pairs of stress, beats and off beats. thats what i've studyin in my post graduation.

this one is supposed to be in free verse. the rhyme pattern is not there but you feel it cause of the alliteration of the consonant /g/

Smart huh!! :) thanks for loving the portrait. i think of you lying there, but ur hairdo wont match...

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